Scriptel
the chapters are short and of mediocre quality, the descriptions are simple and the story is monotonous, mc follows the flow more than doing something of his own, he looks like a doll doing what comes around him, even the conversations are simple and forced, he doesn't c is no growth or difficulty on the mc. Writing stories based on minecraft is difficult and it takes a lot of inventiveness I appreciate the author's idea and I hope he does more to make his world evolve
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