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The quality of writing is commendable, but still needs some work. Grammar, spelling, and syntax errors can be solved with a quick skim by the author. The author updates regularly. I envy him, to be honest. The story develops, but not in a unique and unpredictable way. It seems too cliché. Characters' designs leave much to want for. The school girl, the intimidating boss, the obedient butler...these are merely overused stereotypes. World seems well described, and is realistic. Overall, an average novel.