I fucked up my life so I am starting again!?

A above average in looks orphan named karma outo gets a special kind of power right before getting brutally abused. . . . . my first time trying out for experience and fun hope you guys will rate it and give me comments so that I can improve later on in the furture. English is my second language so my grammer may not be the best hope and I don't have anyone to edit it for me so hope u guys will understand it and give me tips and hints to improve