Daoist_Ewilan
Great start and gives you what you ask for but the character developement in the game is a little off if you ask me I mean levelling up side jobs in games gives extra stats and buffs. But if you make that he will be the most powerful player with no actiall battle skills just base stats AKA a true OPMC. But im getting side tracked i think the inrro of the personal life of the mc needs more explenation and since also have played everything in the game he should know the short commings of each one and be able to make judgement base from that to make better items. Even if he doesn't enjoy hunting and other stuff force the MC to use his items to again make better weapons/equipments.