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I am Uzumaki Naruto

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CrimsonThunder
CrimsonThunderLv4CrimsonThunder

I am changing my review from a solid 4.6 to 2.4 because of the botched power levels. Naruto is 'The Gamer', yes with a capital 'G', yet Sasuke achieves the same level as him in a couple of months. He is The Gamer, he doesn't need talent, all he needs is Gamer's body. I am very disappointed in this development, just to make team 7 relevent you are force feeding them with power. Naruto had to bust his Ass from a young age to reach that level and a Sasuke with no motivation reaches the same level as him?. Plus the Shinobi are not saiyans, they don't have the adaptable physique and a young child or teenager like Sasuke cannot get used to that high gravity in such short time. In short the story is full of plotholes, even a mtl fanfiction has less plotholes than this.

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Mirio_kun
Mirio_kunLv1Mirio_kun

I am surprised Naruto is still not in T I. He is running around like he is in a holiday. At this time I am pretty sure he has 24/7 Anbu with him. And right after being kicked out he meets Hokage are you telling me he can't see it. Again even if you want to write a light hearted Naruto fic make it non biase towards leaf. Because I am 100% sure if you truly go inside Naruto you will become angst king.

mutekishifu
mutekishifuLv5mutekishifu

when i read the level of sasuke it made me want to drop it, man (you take 4 years with the stamps (you had kage bunshin), sasuke only needed 2 months to get over it with the 15% of the biju) i could stay here and give 100 reasons, but its stupid. for this chapter I will give a 2-star review, really that junk novel the sad that I expected more from this author.

Nani_Sensei
Nani_SenseiAuthorNani_Sensei

Hello it's your author here with his shameless review. Well I am posting this note to let you all know that I am a novice writer and the story I am writing will have many mistake. It is an alternative universe so there will be many things different from cannon. I will try my best to make it interesting to the best of my abilities and I want to thank all of those readers who spend time on this novel. Arigato and Sayonara

Zetsway
ZetswayLv12Zetsway

The author probably watched Naruto about 15 years ago and decided to write a fanfiction. 80% of the stuff said in here is crap. The other 20% are grammatical mistakes.(And no, I'm not saying that my grammar is better)

MorningWood_Dao
MorningWood_DaoLv5MorningWood_Dao

system novel with a botched character's stats. you can see if this kind of novel is good or bad based on characters stats. if you spot inconsistency in multiple chapters. then it's bad. you can say that author didn't care enough to their own novel. this novel is still new, which is still easy for author to fix this problem. it's not that hard to fix 20ch in a week. if the problem still exist after a month or 2, then it's not worth reading and consider to drop it

ediushshshs599_1
ediushshshs599_1Lv3ediushshshs599_1

the story is completely bland i mean the creativity and writing style is just bad. the author doesn't seem to have thought about the story a lot, he just makes things up on the spot to keep it going. it's a waste of time to read it.

Insane_Pumpkin
Insane_PumpkinLv5Insane_Pumpkin

The point of having a System is being OP, the Gaming System is OP among the other systems... So when you have the Gaming System and still can't become much stronger from side characters of your world then you are either so trash that system can't hep you or your doing something wrong. So please author tell what is your MC doing wrong? Or maybe change him for another one with better brain...

Idealist
IdealistLv13Idealist

WQ 4 SD 1 CD 1 US 3 WB 3 Overall 2.6 Both CD and SD are a disappointment for me, at first, it was so good. but it totally butchered especially the CD.

DivineHyper
DivineHyperLv12DivineHyper

is this harem? .

asuraseagod
asuraseagodLv1asuraseagod

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Ienor04
Ienor04Lv1Ienor04

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Erin_beast
Erin_beastLv14Erin_beast

This story os good but I think there are to many plot holes and a lot of inconsistencies in this story because mc has a way of stopping his nerf

The_EnlightenedOne
The_EnlightenedOneLv13The_EnlightenedOne

So far the story is great. Will there be any ntr, rape, or anything dramatic like that? I would like to know now as naruto has a lot of drama in it.

Just_A_Simp
Just_A_SimpLv1Just_A_Simp

I luv dissss ^^ I don't care if there arent character designs to this and I don't care how often this posts, 5 stars, no less than that. Also I need more words so heed the spam: e e e e e e e e e e e e e.e. e.e e.e. e e e e e e e e e e

Ezzaldien_s
Ezzaldien_sLv3Ezzaldien_s

More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More

Ghostlyyyy
GhostlyyyyLv4Ghostlyyyy

you broke me author,hate how the romaromance goes its super forced and rushed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kyosuke_Uchiha
Kyosuke_UchihaLv3Kyosuke_Uchiha

As long as its not harem you can take mY veiw and stones. 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎

Just_A_Simp
Just_A_SimpLv1Just_A_Simp

I kinda changing my mind. Beginning? Yeah I like it. Middle? A harem? I was already a little erked because harems are everywhere. Then most the story was consumed by them harem like every other story. When there isn't anything to do with the harem, most the time stats make up a third of the chapter and then the entire story became tinkerbell. Honestly, I don't even know what to say anymore.

killiam11
killiam11Lv2killiam11

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