Nani_Sensei
I am changing my review from a solid 4.6 to 2.4 because of the botched power levels. Naruto is 'The Gamer', yes with a capital 'G', yet Sasuke achieves the same level as him in a couple of months. He is The Gamer, he doesn't need talent, all he needs is Gamer's body. I am very disappointed in this development, just to make team 7 relevent you are force feeding them with power. Naruto had to bust his Ass from a young age to reach that level and a Sasuke with no motivation reaches the same level as him?. Plus the Shinobi are not saiyans, they don't have the adaptable physique and a young child or teenager like Sasuke cannot get used to that high gravity in such short time. In short the story is full of plotholes, even a mtl fanfiction has less plotholes than this.
I am surprised Naruto is still not in T I. He is running around like he is in a holiday. At this time I am pretty sure he has 24/7 Anbu with him. And right after being kicked out he meets Hokage are you telling me he can't see it. Again even if you want to write a light hearted Naruto fic make it non biase towards leaf. Because I am 100% sure if you truly go inside Naruto you will become angst king.
when i read the level of sasuke it made me want to drop it, man (you take 4 years with the stamps (you had kage bunshin), sasuke only needed 2 months to get over it with the 15% of the biju) i could stay here and give 100 reasons, but its stupid. for this chapter I will give a 2-star review, really that junk novel the sad that I expected more from this author.
Hello it's your author here with his shameless review. Well I am posting this note to let you all know that I am a novice writer and the story I am writing will have many mistake. It is an alternative universe so there will be many things different from cannon. I will try my best to make it interesting to the best of my abilities and I want to thank all of those readers who spend time on this novel. Arigato and Sayonara
system novel with a botched character's stats. you can see if this kind of novel is good or bad based on characters stats. if you spot inconsistency in multiple chapters. then it's bad. you can say that author didn't care enough to their own novel. this novel is still new, which is still easy for author to fix this problem. it's not that hard to fix 20ch in a week. if the problem still exist after a month or 2, then it's not worth reading and consider to drop it
The point of having a System is being OP, the Gaming System is OP among the other systems... So when you have the Gaming System and still can't become much stronger from side characters of your world then you are either so trash that system can't hep you or your doing something wrong. So please author tell what is your MC doing wrong? Or maybe change him for another one with better brain...
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As long as its not harem you can take mY veiw and stones. πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
I kinda changing my mind. Beginning? Yeah I like it. Middle? A harem? I was already a little erked because harems are everywhere. Then most the story was consumed by them harem like every other story. When there isn't anything to do with the harem, most the time stats make up a third of the chapter and then the entire story became tinkerbell. Honestly, I don't even know what to say anymore.