mattfuncool
I read until 34. The writing quality is understandable but still can be improved. The story idea is not bad, the plot moves fast given the short chapters. I leave it because of the unpleasant feelings I got from reading forced situations (With a relevant character), and a secondary / villain having *** scenes with "innocent" pretty girls. Just bullshit. The MC lacks character, he looks like a rag doll. The relationships between the characters could be improved so as not to seem empty, obvious and fucking forced. There is nothing that attracts me to continue reading, and that I came for the factor of 'Kingdom Building', and the Harem, thinking that the MC was going to break it. I am disappointed, and I hope the author supports the review and does not delete it. Let everyone know what they can find, the bad taste in my mouth has saved me too many times. (Spoiler?) In a forced scene, I think it would be nice to say that there is NTR (MC). Although it does not get to be sexual. Damn commitments.
I came here for Kingdom building/Necromancer, Harem and good lemon. But all i got was a boring plot with random people lemon. Mc: I really like the idea but it's really boring, the guy gots so much power but he verly even uses it. I keep forgetting he's a necromancer, instead he feels more like one of those snake like guy's that's always plotting against the mc.(Btw i stopped at chapter 48) Lemon: really disappointed in the lemon I doubt anyone looking for lemon, wants to see random people doing instead of the mc.( I don't really count foreplay that's really weak to me). Harem: The harem is ok mc respects them and they seem to really care for him and respect him. i did read a review that there is NTR just putting that out there for anyone that wants to know.
I just started reading this book and so far i am enjoying it........................................................................................ Just a few error in spelling here and there but it is a good book and i will definitely keep reading.......................................... i have added it to my library................................