Reviews of I am Shinji Matou
I am Shinji Matou
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- Writing Quality
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- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
I like the concept but the MC stays in each world for such a short time that it is reducing the amount of fun the story provides. Everytime, just as the MC is about to stabalize his existence in a world, he moves on to the next, making pretty much no impact at all. As a result, we see no effect of his actions. Its like saying: check this out, I'm going to do this. And then turning it into a cliffhanger by ending that sequence at that. As a result, each build up is met with severe anticlimax by there being no climax other than a transition to a new world. Everytime just as you get interested in seeing what will happen, he will do a cliffhanger end by simply switching worlds and leaving any entertaining results out to dry. That said, the concept is really fun, and Im half tempted to write my own fic based on the combination of these worlds. The MC is a bit of a bastard but that's actually quite fun, or well it would be if we saw what effects it would have on the stories of the world he performs his actions in. Unfortunately he is long gone before we get to see the results.
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Story development could be better. The way he got his cheat is really weird. 4 chapters and he already leaves his world. In the other world, the seriousness has gone down, replaced by comedy (at least it really is funny). The story has become a little too crackish in my opinion. Him being Matou Shinji is losing relevance. World background is a little lacking.
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this is awesome at first i thought its won't gonna be good but who knew its gold thanks for this chapter please update more chapter author san [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
.................................................................... so far so good .... mc try his best to survive int his world with persuation 100 charm 100 and luck 100 love the way he bullshitting his way out and his trump card is a smack in the face as his technique ahahahahaaha π and moar please moar like daily update i guess? π£
