Glamouranj
To be honest, the grammar and spelling need work- but it only takes away a little bit. You can still understand the writer's intention and what they were trying to convey. The world and family background of the characters are built extremely well. The story reminds me of my bittersweet middle school days (except there was no romance in middle school, LOL). The characters are all fun in their own way, but if there was something to fault them for, it'd be that all of them are irrationally cheerful. TL;DR : I believe that given enough sharpening, this story has the potential to be published. Definitely a diamond in the rough.