Klobus
I like the concept. Story has big potential, hope to see more. 010100101010010101010100101010010101010100101010010101010100101010010101010100101010010101010100101010010101010100101010010101010100101010010101010100101010010101010100101010010101010100101010010101010100101010010101010100101010010101010100101010010101010100101010010101010100101010010101
A good start to the story though at first it seemed like a clone of all the other Marvel fan-fics I've read online. The commonplace system with stats is not unusual along with a point system but the emotional factor to garner points to use is a novel twist. The characters initial life conditions as a homeless **** is also a refreshing difference from usual multi story birth and baby arc. The characters condition is wonderfully is descriptive. The hope is the author will continue to surprise us with his new take on the Marvel Cinematic Universe fan fiction.