Pikachu
Writing Quality is actually ok for me. But almost everything else is all wrong. Cheat is kinda weird. It says evolution but it says hidden evolution but still the standard lizard to snake to python to flood dragon to blah blah blah template. Classic sparrow bird template. And for his second beast he just had to get a cloud mist beast that publicly only has a Level three potential leading to another few rounds of underestimation and mocking from enemies and face slapping from the MC. No depth, No originality, nothing fascinating and no twist and turns. No tension, no charm, bland and lacks relativity and creativity. And the funny thing is that this book still had more than 16k Powerstone supporting it. Ain't that funny? way more than the leading book on the Powerstone rankings. And it's absolute garbage. World background is lacking. All experienced readers, prepare to lose some brain cells if you read this. Cliche lines, cliche plot, very predictable. My final evaluation, Author is terrible at writing with zero innovation. Unless of course this is just a trial read and the author isn't taking this seriously.
Read three chapters and I can't continue. It's just trash. Characters are stereotypical af, sentences make no sense, story is alright, but generic as usual. The MC has a "cute sparrow", and somehow when the mc gives it the name "golden sparrow" it changes from a "cute sparrow" to a "golden sparrow". Overall, It's just bad. Don't recommend, unless you're trying to lose brain cells.
Most everything is told to you. The MC is instantly powerful with no struggle. I feel no connection with the character as he's got no depth at all. lots of little things don't make sense if you think about it... I feel that the author needs to take more time to think through the story and practice showing and less telling of what happens.
This is a pretty standard beast taming/-training story, but it is written pretty well. I've read the trial chapters, but now I'm stuck- in order to continue I'il have to continue on my phone, -which I don't like, I mean being ABLE to read on your phone is cool, but being locked out via PC is a travesty, I do read on my phone while on the buss, etc. but now I'm home with access to a computer with a BIG screen which I can read on with my head/neck in a COMFORTABLE position since I'm reading for an extended period of time! I don't know whether the author has any say in this, but I'm temporarily abandoning this story...