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I'm rewriting it.

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PancakesWitch
PancakesWitchLv13PancakesWitch

MONGIRLS?! FUTA LEAD??! Immediately added to Library!....................................................................................................

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jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5jeanpierregerardo

interesting and longer than your other story, ¿you will build an empire of monsters?, I want to see where it goes. good start. wives of different races would be good, so that you have strong descendants in breed varieties. -------------------------------------------------------- Put a cover with the image you have in mind for your protagonist. _______________________ _$$$$$$$___ _______ ________________________$$$$$$$$$$_______ _ ________________________$$$$$$$$$$$_______ _________________________$$$$$$$$$$$$$$___ __________________________$$$$$$$$$$$_____ _____________________________$$$$$$$$$ ...$$$$ ___________________________$$$$$$$$$$_____ __________________________$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$__ ________________$$$______$$$$$$$$$$$$$$___ ______________$$$$$$$$_____$$$$$$__$$$$$__ _____________$$$$$$$$$$_____$$$$____$$$$$_ ___________$$$$$$_$$$$$$$$__$$$$______$$$$ __________$$$$$_____$$$$$$$$_$$$$_______$$$ ___ _____$$$$$_________$$$$$$$$$$$$_______$$$ _______ $$$_____________$$$$$$$$$$$________$$$ _____ $$$__ ______________$$$$$$$$$$________$$$$$$ __$$$$$$__________________$$$$$$$_________

Dao_of_tiddie
Dao_of_tiddieLv14Dao_of_tiddie

🤷‍♂️ some advanced fetishes here 👍 Chicks with dicks👍👍 I enjoy this author's work quite a bit. Keep going at it and writing what you enjoy 🕺🕺🕺🕺🕺🕺

PleasantPresent
PleasantPresentLv10PleasantPresent

The writing quality is good and the stability as well. The story development is a bit lacking but that is because there are a lot of good sex scenes. The characters are all different, though there are quite a few centaurs and only a few orcs. The world background is interesting but till now hasn't been shown a lot and instead been mostly vaguely described though the part that was shown was good. The orc futar that is the mc gets turned into a normal human girl, which I think disliked quite a few but since this story is named an orcs journey I expect her to turn herself back after expanding her harem and building the story up. To summit up, it's pretty good and needs more readers.

James_Roberson
James_RobersonLv14James_Roberson

A very good story now plot doesn't advance fast but there's all kinds of romance scenes and there's something for everyone also of what plot there is it's very interesting and well thought out

deadhydra50
deadhydra50Lv15deadhydra50

Big dick Tobruk cucks all the girls

Dechet
DechetLv5Dechet

Reveal spoiler

NewManagement
NewManagementLv5NewManagement

Very good start on the novel. Definitely a different story that you usually don’t see on webnovel. Waiting for more but looking good so far.

mythedge
mythedgeLv10mythedge

Not quite a review but good luck with the rewrite, went and read all your stories after discovering this one and was consistently impressed with the quality of your work. I hope you will be happy with the next iteration of this project or any other project for that matter.