Ellendria
Hello everyone Ellendria here. This is my second novel that I'm working on. I'm planning to jump around between my two stories to keep my creative juices flowing. I feel this first chapter of mine for this novel went pretty great. As always for my returners I write on my phone so sorry if things appear off. Anyway thanks for stopping by! đđ€©đđ
A unique concept like reincarnation but done in a different way, most reincarnation novels only reincarnate the soul but this novel practically scarp that and gave the stale concept a refreshing touch. The system interaction with the MC is kind of like in the novel monster hunter where the system isn't dull or boring. A great concept and a great novel if executed correctly.
I enjoyed reading your story, even though I normally donât go for this genre. If i may make the suggestion; perhaps try to elaborate more about each character? I think I would be able to feel even more for them. I get a good feeling from it and hope you will continue, I plan on checking out your other work as well.
I feel that this book is overlooked, it's really quite good. Sure there are some things that could be better. Such as the pacing being a little to fast, the spontaneous situation changes and what not. Considering not just everyone can write a good book, I think it's fair to say that this is better then a good bit.
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this is a very good novel please continue to post more chapters in the future please. eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
this is a very good novel please continue to post more chapters in the future please. eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee