MisterE05
Boredom personified. I read this on my alt just to get a good grasp on the story. So far (15 Chapters) it's literally just a fucking sting ray that can't evolve. That's it, that is the only thing unique about it's entire plot. He does get passive upgrades and stuff like that but he's still just a fucking sting ray. Writing Quality- 3 Simply mediocre; no beautiful sentence structure or truly grasping words. Nothing of that sorts Updates- Frequent Story Development-0, None; it's just a stingray that's underwater. All it does is be a stingray and acquire upgrades. Character Design- 0, Literally none There's literally no development, no prior information nothing that can let us formulate even a fucking fandom wiki page for MC. World Background- It's literally just fucking underwater.
Author goes premium after 20-ish chapters, lol? Writing seems okay for now and plot is original enough. MC gives rebelleious/annoying teenager vibes but explained by low IQ that can eventually be upgraded so character growth and better personality may be a thing. Did not read enough to determine if worth spending my stones on. Novels typically go premium after 70-100 chapters.
The real score: 4/5 Well, I wasn't expecting this. A system novel that is set out to mock the system Novel model. You would probably think that this is like spider or slime where theirs magic and stuff. But no, the upgrades that our unwitting protagonist gets are along the lines of "better poison" or "deep pressure fins." Yea, he doesn't get super powers. This is a bad situation and he's trying to m, well not make the best of it and more survive it. To give you an idea, health is regenerated slowly, by resting and letting wounds close. Also eating. Eating is important. Heck, the guy isn't even isekaied, he's off the coast of Italy. And since he's in the ocean, we have no idea of the time period. So anything can happen in the future. While also being so restrictive, because the protagonist is only a stingray.
Just ignore this review, i do it just bcs i wanna see the rating up and having more people know it, also bcs of one of author s previous work which has over 1 mil words (if i m right), which i believe should get more attention i didn t say is good, didn t say is bad, but just for the effort i really believe more people should check it out, it has the same amount of reviews as this novel despite having like, double views, which is a shame, heard the plot is really good on that one Well i would ve said something about this novel too but i didn t read it, i don t plan to either as it goes prem at chapter 20 and is just too few chapters for me, no offence, also i don t complain as i saw what the author said about it, well it is what it is, as i said above u can just ignore this review, i m just a random person who wants effort to be rewarded, more or less
An interesting concept for a system story and definitely a fresh read if you are sick to death of face slapping and MCs who are suddenly cultivation gods, master craftsmen, and unbeatable fighters. The descriptions of most of ocean’s creatures seem to be accurate and researched. The combat is descriptive and easy to follow, yet still paced well enough to remain exciting. The dialogue is good and the main character is likable. Nice usage of side-characters as well. Updates regularly and the author is responsive in comments. I gave good marks all around. Only constructive criticisms would be some minor pronoun mistakes once in awhile that makes one or two paragraphs a little confusing, but it only occurs A couple times. Would definitely recommend. 🤘
I've read all the free chapters when I make this review. Although I'm not a big fan of a system-themed story, but I can't understand how the author deserves all these bullies omg. It's written well enough to be understood, it's descriptive, and it's constantly rewritten. This is definitely worth a shot, guys.