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Great fic so far. Definitely worth a read.
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Improve your grammar, I won't give it 4 stars because it didn't bother me and it's just advice --------------------------------------------------------------
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This is amazing. Author do you plan to have MC Trunks to have his special transformation like Beast Gohan or follow Super Saiyan Transformations or entirely different directions ? Author if you can please refer to the 'LEGEND -A DRAGON BALL TALE' by STUDIO STRAY DOG ?
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Me gustó mucho no la abandones por favor. ................................................................. ................................................................
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i love it. . . . 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😁
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Hands down my favourite Dragon Ball fanfic, potentially one of the best if it continues. I am so hyped after reading just 7 chapters. I need more!
This is actually a really good Dragon ball Fanfiction. The length of the chapters are plentiful the grammar is good and the Mc development isn’t rushed to a ridiculous degree. I suggest at least to give it a read.
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Honestly it was great, this is like one of the only 5 stars that I have ever given for a book so that's saying something. My only complaint is that... "I WANT MORE!"
Very good writing quality Very good story development Very good character design Very good updating stability Very good world background
I need a good Dragonball fanfic as I unfortunately haven‘t found any yet.