Tsumihoshi
5 star because anything less gets removed. This is a fanfic where MC is so dumb (not using power she has, because of fear of losing control of it) then she gets mutilated, her womb gets ****ed up and she can't have babies anymore. The title suits this fanfic 100%. Everything is about Naruto. MC will get raped/****ed/used as a cum dumpster/please 3 universes with her spread out womb as long as naruto is happy. Author is disgusting. And hi author, i know you will delete this review as you did will all the other negative ones. but **** you.
It's a great story. I don't think there are much others like this one. If there are then not at this quality. It's a good story with lots of wholesome stuff but at the same time still having serious moments and good story development with great characters personalities. If you're the type that dislikes "genderbend" novels I do recommend to at least read the 1st 2 chapters. You won't regret it, I'm sure of that. There is more to it than just randomly swapping the gender of our MC, unlike some novels.
A very good novel with a good starting premise that is done well. The character development in regards to the character's relationships is enjoyable and easy to understand as well as the implied reasons for those developments. The way that tailed beasts power sets are used is also unique and the way they work with the situation the mc finds herself in is well thought out. I started reading this novel on another site called scriblehub and hope others will go there too to support the author.
very nice story so far. i do have a question though. each kyubi has its own form of kekki genki. 1 tails uses sand ect, what will the nine tails ability be? they never really showed in the anime that kurama had one. also im very much looking forward to how the akutski (yes i misspelled) are handled.
It's good I liked the long chapters. You did a good job shifting the personalities of the characters to match the story being told, instead of using the characters as constants in the story its probably pretty easy to use the excuse (that's what the characters would do because that's what they did). You instead used the characters as templates for the characters you created. and I can assure you that you have created a new Naruto, Sasuke, and Sakura, they are different enough from the original characters that they should be their own characters.