99 Please give your opinion, character construction for my new Fanfic.

STATUS:

Name: Naruto Uzumaki.

Class: Shinobi Apprentice.

Affiliation: Konohagakure.

Titles: He Who Lived Two Lives, Bearer of the Eyes of Heaven, Prince Uzumaki, Jinchuuriki of the Nine-Tails.

Level - 01 (exp: 00/10)

HP - 1,000 (100-Average Civilian)

Chakra - 1,000 (100-Average Civilian)

Strength - 50 (10-Average Civilian)

Dexterity - 20 (10-Average Civilian)

Resistance - 100 (10-Average Civilian)

Intelligence - 50 (10-Average Civilian)

Speed - 50 (10-Average Civilian)

Elemental Affinities: Wind, Thunder, Yang and Space.

Kekkei Genkais: Space Release, Rikugan(Six Eyes, Eyes of Heaven/Paradise), Adamantine Sealing Chains.

(Note: Individuals suitable for shinobi training must have at least twice the attributes of a common civilian, individuals belonging to shinobi clans tend to have two to five times more attributes than a common civilian, varying according to specialty of the clan they belong to).

Skills:

Rikugan: Passive/Active, Doujutsu.

Eye Technique, gifted to Naruto/Raiden, by the universe itself due to the purity of his soul and incorruptible will. Grants the user the ability to achieve Chakra Control at the atomic level through training, making all techniques more precise and powerful and eliminating natural Chakra waste to a minimum, 360° degree vision, vision of the energy flow of the environment and beyond. living beings. In passive mode, all skills are substantially restricted within a radius of up to 100 meters from the user, the only exception being Chakra Control, there is no theoretical limit to doujutsu, all skills in active mode are proportional to the user's Chakra and Doujutsu mastery level, in active mode due to its enormous beauty, Doujutsu can cause temporary hypnosis and confusion in individuals whose spiritual energy is lower than the user's, strong-willed or well-trained individuals are not subject to this effect.

Bonus 01: Passively increases the user's affinity with the space attribute.

Bonus 02: Increases the user's resistance against illusory techniques.

Bonus 03: It cannot be transplanted, but it can be genetically inherited.

Bonus 04: Doujutsu can be Activated or Deactivated at will by the user.

Adamantine Sealing Chains: Formed by 06 Chacka constructs in the shape of expandable chains, they are capable of causing physical damage and have the ability to seal the Chakra of those trapped by them, they can be manipulated at will by the user and manifested from any part of the body . Requires high Chakra control to use.

Spatial Release: Innate ability to manipulate Space. It is born from the influence of high levels of Yin-Yang Chakra on the user's paternal lineage. Due to Rikugan, all spatial techniques can be performed without hand seals, requiring only the refinement of Chakra control and the technique used. This Kekkei Genkai can be inherited genetically.

Jutsus:

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Hey guys, for those who follow me, you know that I'm trying out an original Naruto fanfic, this would be the construction of the character I imagined, it may seem like overpower, but in the beginning it's not, because even with all these powers Naruto would have to train them exhaustively to become really powerful, I would like you to give your opinion if possible, tomorrow I should publish the new chapter... Thank you very much for your support so far.

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