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The premise of the story is really good. The only problem I might have with this story is that Gojo is OOC. You could've gone with 'Reincarnated into HXH as Gojo' instead of making it the real Gojo and altering his character. Honestly, the only thing similar to the original is his love of sweets. I hope you don't end up following the storyline too strictly. I want to see Gojo go his own path and alter the events of the story (whether it's a conscience decision or by accident, I don't mind). I'm still looking forward to an update. Take your time and rest well.
Bruh, you should have just created you OC MC so you can do or make him behave the way you want him to be, instead of using Gojo when you don't even know how the actual Gojo behaves or acts. When in reading your MC, I don't see Gojo, but an OC, dressed like Gojo and has his powers. I know that this is supposed to be a fanfic but remember that you used an existing character, people reads your fanfic because they saw Gojo, if they're not seeing gojo in it, they will surely be disappointed.
rating: 2.8 reason: characters are aggressive for no reason at all, some people don't even say remotely what they would say such as the 1st test examiner saying 'maggots' and lots of cursing, although I feel like the cursing and what they would say are better than what they were in the beginning, the update schedule is pretty good so five stars, to sum it up characters don't say what they should according to their personality but it gets better later