ilovekats
good atleast you didn't take credit for this and you also properly credited the original translator good atleast you didn't take credit for this and you also properly credited the original translator good atleast you didn't take credit for this and you also properly credited the original translator good atleast you didn't take credit for this and you also properly credited the original translator
Alright story, not the best not the worst. I liked the idea behind the path choosing system however what rly destroys the story for me is the harem. The mc literally has no attraction to a girl but suddenly he gets an award from the system if he adds them to his harem and he then follows this to a t. Not only does he become a slave to the system, I am not gonna read a story about an mc going about collecting girls like they are dolls. Sorry, but I happen to like female characters and hate seeing them constantly used as dolls on a list. Like, do any authors have any sense? Like where tf is the personality? Its like they're empty shells just waiting for the mc to collect them... So disappointing tbh
I liked the idea of the novel, but am disappointed in how it is progressing. Mc constantly tries to fight and create enemy even when it could be avoided or he could control his greed, his body is said to be in early teens then he tries starting to picking up girls. Shows up his power in front of some of the most dangerous guys in the hxh world. And most of all, Author has changed the world which is not a butterfly effect just because he felt like it. I am not telling it is wrong, just it felt forced just for us to see his growth in power.
Truly remarkable story. The author did very well to post it on this site, it is really a very respectable Fan Fiction. **: I know that whoever copies and pastes it on this site is not the author or the translator, but I don't know what term to use, so go for "author". Obviously a heartfelt thanks also to the original author and translator, but it is also true that I would never have discovered it without "the author".
I loke the premise but the quests are too easy for such ridiculous rewards. The inconsistencies also made the story worse, like Hanzo telling Leorio and Kurapika about Nen, then after a few chapters, they act like they never heard of Nen before. The Characters also didn't play out their roles, like Ryodan acting chummy despite MC almost killing Uvogin. Also if Chrollo is interested in MC's skills, he would simply take it. That's the Troupe's motto after all.
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