Human Cultivation

The tension was perfectly well done, especially in the first chapter, it was enough to make me flip the next page but it was too lengthy. The next few chapters are well done too! Writing quality deserves a thumbs up, update stability is decent. Good job and keep up the work!

I really liked this story. I'm usually not into reading horror stories but this one was really good. Great job, keep writing, and thank you for helping me as well!!

Excellent writing, and super gripping scenes! The author has a real knack for dialog and characters. I'll be excited to add this and see what comes next

Story is well written. Synopsis is pretty good as well. Plot was very interesting. Keep up the good work author!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow, the synopsis alone is catchy, I'm definitely reading this. I haven't read system books that much but for this, I'm willing to read and find out. thank you for the referral

Okay, first and foremost I just want to say that this is an amazing story thus far. The chapters are long and the the writing style is very good. But, there were some mistakes, though minor, it would greatly help your readers if you could clean them, like typos, punctuation marks and capitalization. I hope you won't drop this book. More power author!

mostly enjoyed. Sorry for um... DECIMATING your comment section coughs coughs. not a self promo or anything BUT feel free to y'know... maybe check out my novel maybe maybe.

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very rarely will I write a review. The MC is probably the dumbest one you'll meet in any novel, on multiple occasions common sense dosent exist at all in any of the characters, only reason Zane hasn't died is simply plot armor, some novels have plot armor but Zane wears it like its out of style and some of the plot feels extremely forced in one of the early chapters.

good fiction but logically doesn't make sense .if they raised humans as cattle then why not raise the same way humans raise animals. why even allow them to be so advanced .

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Good book and good selection of characters. I am not a big fan of the systems novels but this... seems intriguing to me for some reasons... Keep up the work, Author!