Writing Quality: ⭐⭐⭐
Story Development:⭐⭐⭐
Character Design:⭐⭐⭐⭐
Updating Stability:⭐⭐⭐
World Background:⭐⭐⭐⭐
Sigh, first of all, my intention of writing this review isn't to offense the author or anyone else for that matter, and I'm just stating my opinion and a fact, if you don't like it so be it. okay let's get into the problem,
the first one is how the mc is tooooo op for HOTD world and I bet when the canon start there's nothing that can stop MC and every fighting scene the MC just gonna steamroll it or holding back so the fight scene will be seemingly interesting so this fanfic gonna be your typical Pokemon collecting. (If I'm wrong then that's mean I'm incompetent)
the second problem is that how the girl, I mean EVERY girl easily blushes because of the MC for no reason (I get it that MC is handsome but still), and I don't remember HOTD girl is that cheap, or maybe I'm the one who is forgetting something? I don't know man.
the third problem is how Rei shares her problem with a guy she is just known for around 2 days ago as if they were a best friend, also a headstrong girl like Rei isn't going around and telling anyone who saves her, and because of that she shares her problem with a stranger and crying because of it.
to sum it up the story is not bad if you just gonna shut your brain off and think with your lower half, you could certainly enjoy the story more, but too bad I lost my interest in chapter 4 maybe I'm gonna back when I decided to think with my lower half. ( I could be wrong because I stopped reading at chapter 4)
Pls don't delete the review and don't be discouraged because of this review of mine, have a good day, and see you later.
