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Amazing book is a 100% must read. Definitely my favourite ever TDG fanfic its definitely one of the best fanfics I've ever read. But I think you should let Nei Lie get power as to not be divined so easily by the sage emporer. Also can you use the library of heavens path to modify enslavement technique to let you also enslave demon beasts. It would be sick If he just flew around on a Pheonix or something. Also have him take control of other continents and make it something like their are other people living on them it's just no one knows of them.
The writing quality is excellent. The stability of updates is good. The story development is amazing. Character design is excellent, the mc/oc isn't a cookie cutter reincarnate, he actually has a brain and uses it like any individual would, in my opinion. It's almost like reading what a sane individual would do if they were given choices and reincarnated and don't **** it up with bull****. Overall, a good read and good story. look forward to more chapters and reading until the stories conclusion.
MC ****ed every girl. Enslaved every man. Killed the rest. This fanfic reads like a grocery list. That interesting. This happened, then this happened. First few chapters were interesting. After that it's just what happened, who MC ****ed, ye ziyun ****ed, the other girl also ****ed. every1 is ****ed. If you looking for some1 who fucks every1 and enslaves/kills the rest, well this is the fanfic for you. Especially if you like reading grocery lists.
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Sorry, iβm just a shameless fanboy of yours! Greetings from Brazil π§π·! Sorry for my bad grammar, wish you success on your aspirations! Love your reflections and really enjoy your great ideas on this fic. The character never ceases to amaze me! My only problem (nitpick) is that I feel youβll eventually catch the original source material. Perhaps you would be interested to import your mc consciousness into other fandoms (at least, till the TDGβs light novel makes more progress). If you accept suggestions, I would like to see your outtake on universes like... naruto, avatar, asoiaf, marvel, dc, my hero academia... Iβm sure you might have better plans, but alas, I gave you only a suggestion. Thanks again for your great work! Bye π
This is a brilliant piece of literature that I would recommend to even the snobbiest of readers. The MC is not a whiny little b*tch that rolls over for anyone, and is instead the most conniving and cunning person in this entire novel. I love the stupidity shown as well, it is perfectly portrayed and had me laughing at all the right times. But explaining would be spoiling. So instead, go ahead and read this novel in all of it's glory.
The novel is a great read I recommend it to anyone that like original plot designs and an amazing harem story. The novel doesnβt have to many flaws but has a great over all setting and story goes a long greatly with original novel rules and good character build up. Over all good read but if you donβt like op character development donβt read