Reviews of How long has it been?

A review from the author BTW im very new to writing and i also find difficulty in explaining things and making conversations. So anyway this is an early review. so let me say this I dont think i will be consistent with uploading since i find it difficult to get in the mood to do so, but anyway I am currently trying to figure out the character i made and i plan on trying to make him as realistic as i can (which is gonna take a lot of notes and thinking) but anyway im planning on taking some time to figure out the mc and making his past more real i guess. but i hope you guys enjoy also any tips would be amazing for a newbie writer like me <3