this was a very great story with a lot of details and i do enjoy the way she exhibeted the plot but i do suggest she make them speak as if they were in a place like that! Other than this it was amaze!
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i really loved the plot and i Am excited for when she gets to update it and make it even better! I think the way she executed the characters personality traits was on point!