Nuo Jiuyi
The story was fun and Engaging in the beginning then the FLβs character and story development Became inconsistent and boring. there were too many fillers and story was kinda all over the place with random ppl dropping in and forgotten. THe ML seemed powerful but not really- he was ok. I felt very Empathetic about the 2nd & 3rd ML lead. Overall, the story had potential but it had some pacing issues with fillers and not interesting and boring And repetitive dialogues but I still completed the book waiting for that bIg plot reveal but it never really happened. The author brushes it off by telling the Reader that it was βfixedβ but doesnβt go into details how. They throw in a reveal about the 2nd Ml and Fl that I donβt quite understand and makes the story more stranGe.
this is a good novel. it's like a hole that you can't pull out, you can't do anything but to fall deeper. it's inevitable. the only thing that irks me is the fact that mature scenes that spices my life are removed (e.g. C98). it feels like there's something missing if those are removed. i'm currently at C110. why 4 stars only? because i hold grudges LOL. i know i'm being reasonable but... :;(β©Β΄οΉ`β©);: hehe
Love it! The translation is pretty good even though it is MTL-ed. Both FL and ML are strong characters. FL is cute and narcissistic. ML is a typical military commander who is forced to leave the army due to an assasination and being paralyzed. The mystery surrounding the FL is yet to unfold. If u love FMHM and Perfect Secret Wife, you'll definitely love this.
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