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I really like this book because the story is light and not that much drama which I love 💞. I love the main character and the male lead, he treat her different than most male lead 😂. If you like novel that doesn't have a heavy drama I recommend you to read this 🥺. Thank you author for bringing this novel 💕
Dear Author, You already published many chapters and have great views. Why you don't have reviews?? I agree with my previous speaker. You're doing great job! I encourage you to work on the clarity of characters and please, add some action. Even "50 shades of grey" besides spicy *** scenes has a lot of action... All the best!
This actually a pretty good romance story, I can almost feel it at the first chapter. It's light and very fun to read. I can say that this story has a potential, just need to be polished. There are some points that the author need to keep in mind like grammar. There are some paragraphs that I noticed were written in past tense and some were in present tense. My suggestion is the author need to stick which one you want to tell the readers. Just choose one. Other than that, this story is beautiful. Keep up the good work! Fighting!!
Ayeee this is great! :D I really love the light-hearted feel of this story, hehe! Perfect to read on a relaxing rainy day <3 I love the characters also, especially the parents hehe and of courrseee the fl and ml yay! :D I would suggest double-checking your work for errors, tho :D Other than that, great work, author! <3