Reviews of His Highness's Little Ruby

There aren't that many chapters yet but I'm waiting for this to pick up! Keep up the good work! ........................................................................

I think that the pacing is a bit too fast. It feels like the story is fragmented since it feels a bit awkward at some times, like when did she get comfortable enough to ask for help in Chapter 5-6. There's also that intimidating wall of text, maybe try to break the paragraph a few times. Aside from that, the story is good. I see some potential. Potential that I hope it will achieve someday.

The story is interesting so far. There isn't much chapters so I cannot tell that early. Although I don't really like werewolves stories, this one was quite good. You can modify your synopsis to attract more readers. Good luck! [img=recommend]

I love your story. you really have a great idea. your writing style is unique and marvellous. your plot is really going well no doubt. keep it up. and I'm waiting for next.