Reviews of Heterochromia Vampire

This is my first review after reading the 9 chapters that are currently up. writing quality: 4.5: The writing has some minor errors, but they're not that bad, just enough to notice but not affect the reading experience. story development: 4.0: I give it a 4 because the premise is promising but it's too early to see if it will turn out good, so far, pretty good. world background: 4.5: I'm really into dark fantasy, you know, demons, vampires and all that stuff, so this seems right up that ally. character design:4.5: the title says it all. updating stability: 4.0: too early to tell if we will get 9 chapters a week, like the author says.

Writing quality was ok until chapters passes 1xx. Then it become messy - chapters repeated itself, jumped from one time to another. I don't know who to blame - webnovel new system or author. As soon as I found who is responsible I probably change my score