Well I have read upto 210 chapter and all I can say is This is such a fantastic marvel novel. Why is no one continuing to translate it?
From chapter 273 onwards the translation becomes horrible. A real shame as i really enjoyed it so far. Cant recommend reading past chapter 273 as it is.
Motherfu*cker, the later part of this novel is translated by using machine translation, blatantly copied from the MTL website. Please fix the god damn translation if you put this novel in webnovel in the future. And also if possible, please fix the translation in this novel
I tried to read more than the 190 chapters but it didn't work, the MC is very bad and weak, he meddles in literally everything but that is not the problem, but that he makes everything he gets worse, be it the story of the man of iron or thor, the system is useless and also extremely dictator who rules the MC, the MC has no goal or ambition, he just goes around wearing a uniform and facing low level people, 190 chapters and the guy remains poor and hiding identity , disgusted
Overall, no... I put world building and story development as 2 as this is a fanfic. The character is a no from me, just no, and I hate the system. The writing quality... Oh god the writing quality, it's just the worst how can you call this writing it's all wrong. I'll try and be a little constructive, the dialogue is awkward as in it sounds stiff and if you where talking you would sound like your embarrassed. I don't know how to describe the rest of it... Overall, I hope you get a bit better at writing and go back and rewrite everything. It has a good premise but the execution is terrible.
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Not worth the time.........hero complexity is to crappy. @-@. ...........................................................................
To call this trash would be an insult to trash, the grammar is practically unreadable, the MC is a pathetic retard and the plot is convoluted, idiotic and filled with so many holes it has practically become one giant hole.
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Very good novel but the names of people become weird in the second half as if it was copy paste from a translator deadpool becomes dead waiter and other weird stuff
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