Reviews of Hero System! Transported to Another World
Hero System! Transported to Another World
Ripcorez
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To be honest when I first started the book I wasn’t expecting much, but when you read deeper into the novel it becomes so much more intresting and while it may hint of other novels such as “Only I level up solo”, it puts a twist on those things making it have a overall charm to it. Overall it is a outstanding book and I cant wait for more chapters!
Hey! author here, so I have to be shameless and give myself a free 5 star review, right? I hope you guys like this novel, it's my first time trying out such a genre so some things might be off, I can only know when you guys tell me so comments are important if you see any flaws. Also, this is for the WPC so please, if you can spare a few power stones for me, that would be amazing. I hope you all have a wonderful day!
For first-time readers (and with higher Qi according to other reviews) this can be a very good novel. But readers with average Qi who are already well accustomed to this kind of portals + gamer system, this is an average novel, maybe even a little below that. I'm not a professional critic so don't expect a complex analysis from a Google translator user like me. I just found the novel in general average and the writing a little below average. It was not pleasant to read like many others we have out there. I want to make it clear that average is not a bad thing and I intend to continue reading this novel, that was just my honest review. Sorry for any erros, i used google translator.
*PLEASE READ THIS REVIEW ALL THE WAY THROUGH BEFORE DOING ANYTHING* I absolutely love the idea of this book and it should have been an enthralling story. However, as I read into the book it became more and more apparent that the plot of the story was being made up on the fly and that there was only thought as to that exact moment in the book. The main character was made fairly okay in the beginning but very soon he became like the traditional cardboard cutout of an isekai protagonist bearing no unique qualities and his voice and actions we as though they came right from the authors head making the Main Character fell less like a person and more like a puppet. and the "People" around him were even worse, not only were they used to info dump every few chapters but they orbited around the main character draining the chance that they could have had to have a well fleshed out personality. The plot feels forced and like a match made in heaven, making me feel a little weird because although I am not opposed to it, it makes it harder for me to really place myself in the character position and it breaks the immersion I would normally feel from a book. Now with all my nitpicking out of the way I actually really liked this book. The idea and concept behind the book were phenomenal I was so happy to see someone finally make a book within this category of multi-dimensions, and I must say good sir that this author did a wonderful job with his world-building and how he structured the way everything is supposed to work. I think that this author is not bad at writing but just needs some experience with the wording because info-dumping is okay in any book the only thing is that you need to word it so that it is easier on the reader. The characters need a little more fleshing out and they need to be a little touched up but that can be fixed with time and a little bit of hard work. Overall, I liked this book and to the author. This is a bit of constructive criticism and I hope you take it with a grain of salt as I really liked the concept of your book and I would love it even more if it can reach new heights with this review. I HOPE THAT YOU HAVE A WONDERFUL DAY.
To be fair, you have to have a very high IQ to understand Hero System! Transported into Another world. The humor is extremely subtle, and without a solid grasp of isekai most of the jokes will go over a typical viewer's head. There's also Alex's heroic outlook, which is deftly woven into his characterisation - his personal philosophy draws heavily from Ari Kohen's literature, for instance. The fans understand this stuff; they have the intellectual capacity to truly appreciate the depths of these jokes, to realize that they're not just funny- they say something deep about LIFE. As a consequence people who dislike Hero System truly ARE idiots- of course they wouldn't appreciate, for instance, the humour in Alex's pervertedness which itself is an indepth outlook on the psychology of the struggle of males on females in modern society. I'm smirking right now just imagining one of those addlepated simpletons scratching their heads in confusion as Rip Corez's genius unfolds itself on their computer screens. What fools... how I pity them. 😂 And yes by the way, I DO have a Hero System Tattoo. And no, you cannot see it. It's for the ladies' eyes only- And even they have to demonstrate that they're within 5 IQ points of my own (preferably lower) beforehand.
Mostly for XP, but while I am here: 1.I like the main character 2.I like the side characters 3.The grammar isn't too bad (some errors, but not nearly as bad as I have seen around this website) 4.The story is pretty good so far (I am only about 40 chapters in though). Overall, I would say it is worth a shot if you don't hate system stories (or isekai)
dumb mc ✓ check annoying mc ✓ check simp mc ✓ check mc is just retard doesn't even learn from his past mistakes , calls his system annoying , he has foolish pipe dream of become hero and make world in which every hero is good .drools over every girl . I think author delete bad reviews for maintaining rating. this story is utter garbage, waste of brain cell im sure if u hate dumb mc this story is seriously not for u .
The story had potential, the writing quality was good and the MC was likable enough, but it progresses to fast. After a single day he gets into a meeting with the highest ranking people and they personally give him information he doesn’t really need to know at the moment and exposit their inner thoughts every chance they get merely because he is “trustworthy” and “good looking”. If he was alowed to develop and grow a little more without the plot rainning on us like artillery shells in WWII, it would be much more bearable read.
