l came here to review my own novel shamelessly😁😁 If u want to read some friendship based novel then this one is for u... you can also see sad past of ML and how FL and their friends help ML to fight back all those problem u can also see some crazy side of FL😂 l hope u guys will give it a try... thank u😘
Thank you for reviewing mine. So, here is mine to yours. Story wise, this has an interesting plot though you might want to improve the use of the English grammar since I felt that your ideas/thoughts/emotions are scattered all over the paragraphs on each chapter. A prologue would be nice as well. Again, thank you.
The story is written well, the updates seem steady, it progresses excellently, the characters are interesting, and the background is solid. It is truly unique and told in an innovative fashion. There are some minor issues but nothing that greatly takes away from the read. The generally prefer more description of what characters look like and what the setting is like in romance novels. I will give it a pass this time for my rating because I enjoy how smooth and concise the chapters are here. On the other hand, one thing I will take away from slightly is that the story tense shifts a bit during a couple of points in the story (from past to present). It doesn't happen much and I have done the same before as an early author. But anyway, this is an entertaining book that you can easily get hooked to. I'll definitely keep it in my collections and give it a power stone if I remember.
Writing quality has some flaws but I can see that the author is improving on the recent chapters. Chapters are quite short but acceptable. Character interactions are fun, with a bit of comedy involved. As for world background, well, it's simple but it works. Overall, this would be a good read. Definitely recommended.