Mechaletra
Hi peepz! Author here! This will be my first story that has a wider range of readers so I'm a bit nervous but I hope to hear a lot from you. Criticize...anything that will help me do a better job on this craft. I hope that this story will show you some touching perspective in life. Thank you and have fun reading!
Great work author.. I can't help myself but keep reading.. You did a great job here "Her Eyes Can See Me", and I love the structuring of your storyline, it is really fine..I won't be wrong to call it a masterpiece.. This one got me, I know I won't be free from this trap, because the compelling force that keeps me in is so strong. This is very commendable.. I.recommend this amazing masterpiece as an excellent read. Kudos author
For a type of story written for the first time by the author, this is truly a very good one and not the typical romantic cringey stuff you read online nowadays. The plot, the characters, almost everything is perfect, it’s very interesting. I’m not really into reading, I read the synopsis first, If I like it I will continue reading, this story is one of those. It will get you hooked right from the start. The author did really well on writing the story, best of luck on your journey as a writer. I’m rooting for you.
The plot is in different kind and this kind of stories are really interesting to read. I haven't read all of it but surely it will be great and will let me feel different kind of emotions. If you're looking for something different to read, this will definitely be best answer. Continue writing and share us more of your masterpiece, Author❤️😭
The only thing that i can say is WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH cuz this might be the author's very first story but it seems like it can compete with many other stories, the story development is very clean, but it also gives u a bit of confusion because of some mysterious happenings and unexpected revelations🕶️
The synopsis Intrigued me a lot, I always read the synopsis for a clue about the future/present/past plots of the story and I liked what it was written. even though I only finished reading chapter 1, my thoughts and emotions was filled with sorrow and sympathy after Julia's attempt to rid herself into this world but chooses the right path to protect her pregnant mother who was violated in her past. I could somehow feel the rhythm and flow of the words that expresses Julia's deep emotions, which is why this book deserves a lot of credits. Keep on this amazing book, Author! I can't wait to read more!
A story full of angst. Whose cutting onions here? I like fantasy genre very much and when I read the synopsis my interest peaked. But I have to tell you one thing. Plz put trigger warning signs in synopsis or atleast at the beginning of the paragraph so that you and you readers both remain safe. All the best and good luck.