BOOK’S GREAT! Excellent work author![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Pretty good, no noticeable grammar errors, just some tiny mistakes but overall the quality of this book is great. I highly recommend this.
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It's 1st person, my kind of book.
I'm admiring the story and plot... The characters are comprehensive for the story. This story just makes me wanna wriggle. Keep updating, don't give up.
This book is still at it's initial stage. But I would say that it's starting is really interesting. All the best for future work.
Hope author will do best and make it more amazing.