Reviews of Heavenly Pleasure
Heavenly Pleasure
MavisKazuha
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
Hello guys, author here. I would be shameless to give 5 stars to my own novel hahaha ... This novel is inspired by several novels that I read, maybe there are some similarities from them, but the whole story will be different. Please enjoy!
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Honestly when I started reading this story I truly don't have hope or whatever for this story but, the more I read the more surprised me become. Now I think this story have a ton of potential and as well have big of potential to landslide. Why have alot potential?. First, I don't feel something off with the pace of story(the latest is 7th chap). Second, the story have deep background enough( mainly about the clarity of the MC power) to keep more chapters that doesn't make something out of mind like forced plot armor, deep plot hole or something like that. Third,you can go to read the first original power ranking and compare to this story and I think more of you will think that this story have potential to steady go upside as long as the author can handle the threat of the big potential to landslide I said. I think what the threat is would be different from each perspective of the reader but, I belive there would be more of the common thing. That threat in my view is of course start from the inconsistence of the update and then to the lucy/system (Author really have to fix this,why a sistem can blushing?,or etc) and the path that the story would take. For example, the amount of harem that MC would take, out of all the novel I has read(ero of course) none of them can be considered succes in harem(not whole story) when they take really alot of harem even when their background is clear. Why?, Then I would give example nah, "soul exchange program" is one of them. initially this story is really marvelous even in harem because the author take alot to build the first few character of the harem, exactly 7 character. Then the amount is slowly increased but the story is still well controlled because of the detail author give. While the author never satisfied and the amount keep more and more incresed, the detail about each character start to simplified because is imposible to discard the already harem to only make new harem, one of it because the plot need the already harem to continues. Starting then alot of previously readers start to comment: who is she?,who is her?,who is that women?. Alot of that when the alredy exist harem that started appearing again, that because not enough impresion and background for the readers and the story plot is really messed. This is not wuxia story like ATG that can leave the part of harem and send the other to elsewhere. Now the strory has already long hiatus. Why I write this is because I like this story and hope can continues with good reputation. Fortunately the story already keep decent start because the divided marks;wife,personal servant,servant. This surely would be different if don't have this, normal MC that have alot girlfriend is different from king who have alot women, you can easily simplified the harem king have like main wife 1 to 3 who have many major plot with mc, concubine 1 to 9 who sometime have plot with mc and some personal servant that have light plot just to entertain the King. From now on I think I will keep daily vote and support for this story as long the story keep promising. Best wishes for all of us, ALL HAILL TO ERONESS!!!!. lmaoπ€£
The first 12 Chapters are very good and peaked my interest, been a long time since Iβve seen a update hopefully we can get some updates soon, It would be a shame is the author has dropped this story because I very much like to continue too see more development of the Mc, world and of course the Harem
It's funny and I think it will be great as lonh as you will not drop it I always support youππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
update, please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! story has alot of potential don't keep sleeping on that mass realse bro!!
Gran novela: estuve buscando novelas todo el dΓa, pero aΓΊn asΓ no pude encontrar nada que me haga satisfecho, no se si fue un milagro o la voluntad del cielo, que me guiΓ³ hasta aquΓ. Pero sea lo que sea le agradezco, Jajaja. Gracias por los capΓtulos autor, que vivas una vida llena de salud y amor. Salud: para que puedas traernos la voluntad divina *tos* los capΓtulos. Y amor: para que tengas el Γ‘nimo para hacerlo, graciasssss.
English quality - id say maybe 3.5. its satisfactory but still has plenty of errors that needs to be cleaned up. Maybe a bit more proofreading and editing Story is good. Hopefully the infos wont just be left and forgotten later on The cultivation system needs a bit more explaining and detailing. Overall a satisfactory novel with a lot of potential
Big ups to the author and other readers. I await more chapters. Story is so interesting. Writing quality - mechanical accuracy, spelling of words, punctuation, translation, and vocabulary must be improved. High stability of story update, keep it up! World background or setting should even be real and not limited to only anime worlds.