Heavenly Demonic Emperor Annals

A betrayed peerless demonic cultivator named Fang Jun gets reincarnated in the body of a trash young master that shares his name when he gets stabbed in the back by the one he loves the most. ...... I would appreciate any criticism and revisions to make my story better, since I'm a fledgling author in the 11th Grade. I would also like to know what anyone thinks in the comments! The image belongs to it's rightful owner for all intents and purposes.