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Heaven's Hammer

Will_Caruso

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MaxRead
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Look, I’m not gonna read this story or your others for the sole reason of this novel only having 7 chapters. Right, I’m also going to say that you should stop advertising your other novels as the only have ONE FUCKING CHAPTER! Do you get that, ONE SINGLE CHAPTER! I dont give a shit how long those chapters are, it is only one chapter. What can i get from one chapter, nothing much. So stop giving this novel 5 star reviews whilst advertising your two other novels that have a collective total of a whole two chapters... I’m sorry for overreacting like this, but it just annoyed me. So stop, please. just write your other novels along with this one and advertisethem when you have at least 20 chapters in each one of them, then some people might read them. In a bit.

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BrokenH00k
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I haven't read it (nor will i) but had to review to say 1. stop spamming 5 star reviews author 2. shit only has 7 chapters and all of them (mostly) are called 'heaven's hammer' I'd give it 1 star to off-balance other reviews however i haven't read it so morally i can't Anyway thanks, bye.

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Will_Caruso
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From me to you on Fathers day in these times. I just found out an old army buddy of mine lost his fight with PTSD. He was a good man and a great Dad, So I finally hope you can rest now. And God Bless You ! What exactly is post-traumatic stress disorder? Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD) is an anxiety disorder that can occur after a person has been through a traumatic event. These events can include: Natural disasters Car crashes Sexual or physical assaults Terrorist attacks Combat during wartime During a traumatic event, people think that their life or the lives of others are in danger. They may feel afraid or feel that they have no control over what is happening. And if the person has a TBI, too, these feelings of lack of control and fear can balloon into confusion, challenges with memory, or intense emotion. Combat-related PTSD has existed as long as war itself. The condition was called "soldier's heart" in the Civil War, "shell shock" in World War I, and "Combat fatigue" in World War II. Despite the fact that the condition has been around for thousands of years, it is sometimes still difficult, or controversial, to diagnose. Signs and symptoms Generally, symptoms of PTSD can occur when a person re-experiences the traumatic event, tries to avoid thinking about the event, or is experiencing high levels of anxiety related to the event. Some of the most common symptoms include: Having recurrent nightmares Acting or feeling as though the traumatic event were happening again, sometimes called a "flashback" Being physically responsive, such as experiencing a surge in your heart rate or sweating, to reminders of the traumatic event Having a difficult time falling or staying asleep Feeling more irritable or having outbursts of anger Feeling constantly "on guard" or like danger is lurking around every corner Making an effort to avoid thoughts, feelings, or conversations about the traumatic event A loss of interest in important, once positive, activities Experiencing difficulties having positive feelings, such as happiness or love

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So I was wondering if any of you out there in the wide world could let me know what you think about this story. I know it needs work but I was kind of unsure of where to move the from here. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Will_Caruso
Will_CarusoAuthorWill_Caruso

So I was wondering if any of you out there in the wide world could let me know what you think about this story. I know it needs work but I was kind of unsure of where to move the from here. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Will_Caruso
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Hi out there in the wide wide world!!! This is the author and these 3 books are the first I have ever published. These 3 books are for adults that's why they are restricted so if you let your kids read these they are going to grow up real fast, SO YOU ARE WARNED!!!! Expect the breaking of all ten commandments and everyone of the 7 deadly sins. I am at home because of Covid 19 and board out of my mind so this is what happens when I have idle hands LOL LOL!!!

Will_Caruso
Will_CarusoAuthorWill_Caruso

So I was wondering if any of you out there in the wide world could let me know what you think about this story. I know it needs work but I was kind of unsure of where to move the from here. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Will_Caruso
Will_CarusoAuthorWill_Caruso

Hi out there in the wide wide world!!! This is the author and these 3 books are the first I have ever published. These 3 books are for adults that's why they are restricted so if you let your kids read these they are going to grow up real fast, SO YOU ARE WARNED!!!! Expect the breaking of all ten commandments and everyone of the 7 deadly sins. I am at home because of Covid 19 and board out of my mind so this is what happens when I have idle hands LOL LOL!!!

Will_Caruso
Will_CarusoAuthorWill_Caruso

Hi out there in the wide wide world!!! This is the author and these 3 books are the first I have ever published. These 3 books are for adults that's why they are restricted so if you let your kids read these they are going to grow up real fast, SO YOU ARE WARNED!!!! Expect the breaking of all ten commandments and everyone of the 7 deadly sins. I am at home because of Covid 19 and board out of my mind so this is what happens when I have idle hands LOL LOL!!!