Reviews of Heaven's Gambit [BL]
Heaven's Gambit [BL]
ThirtyTyrants
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
The opening is great! We find out a ****y tiny bit of a background on how the two main characters ended up as beasts on Earth. We also get a hint that even though the master of faith was behind this misfortunate event, he isn't very proud or happy of what he has done. Very intriguing and entails a rather mysterious backstory. The writing quality is great. I usually steer away from 3rd person present narrative, but it fit well in this story and I didn't find myself being distracted by it at all. The descriptions are beautiful, almost poetic in a way and paints a vivid image as I read on. The two mc's are so cute, their chemistry is wholesome and I really enjoy the ******* between them. It keeps me on edge and wanting for more. :D Story development is carefully laid out and the world itself is surprisingly detailed. The author clearly put a lot of work and love into creating each scenery. I enjoyed it a lot. All in all, I really enjoyed this story, the plot moves in a steady pace and the characters are very charming in their own, sometimes slightly annoying/mischievous ways. (I'm looking at you, Wu Yun, stop flicking water in Lan Tian's face! Poor guy just wants to bathe in peace.) I recommend it to everyone who enjoys BL and Xianxia with an intriguing plot and mischievously adorable characters. I will certainly read on to find out where the story will lead the two. :)
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I was fascinated by this novel from the beginning. The whole world is described with incredible detail and love, especially the sceneries, which are simply fantastic. You can easily imagine the most diverse situations and regions, despite how unrealistic they seem to be. Regarding the characters, I think the author has a unique trait since practically all of them (even those only mentioned in a few chapters) are valued and have their traits and development. Although many are annoying or hateful, they've their role and relevance in the story, which makes everything even more interesting. Still on the same topic, I want to give special emphasis to the MC and ML. Their personalities are contrasting and all the interactions are funny. It's beautiful to see their development, despite all the differences, and how they go from "travel companions" to "lovers". About the plot, I think it develops at a steady pace. There aren't big time skips or situations prolonged by hundreds of chapters without development, which allows you to appreciate the evolution of the characters and makes it easier to understand all the mysteries surrounding their world. I don't have a problem with the writing. It's good enough to get a smooth and fluid reading and it's very clear that the author is trying to improve with each chapter. Not to mention that I don't have the right to judge someone's writing with my bad English. In short, the novel is excellent and by far one of my favorites. I recommend it to everyone who likes BL and Xianxia. Besides, the author is very friendly and always interacts with his readers in the comments, which always encourages me to comment again.
Omg im soooooo in love with the way u write out the stories 😭❤️ the plot is easy to understand and im literally deep inlove with the characters!! you don't know how much i cried on every chapter😂 the angsty is wow😤 Honestly this is amongst the best bl novel everrrr😝 im grateful you're alive author, you're like the gift from god himself 🤭 i really realllyyyyy want someone to make a manhua for this😭 the story is undyingly beautiful and a masterpiece!!!! Continue to work hard author🙆🏻♀️❤️
