Reviews of Heaven's Fury

It has a great start for a novel. I want to see where this novel could go in the future :) filling the 140 character quota with this sentence

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This story has a lot of potential. Once the action starts it gets brutal. I cannot wait for the next chapter because I feel like something amazing is going to happen. There are grammar problems, but I feel this will improve as the author continues the story and goes back to fix past mistakes. Looking forward to more chapters. Keep up the good work.

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