Aiman_Wasti
As I started reading this book, I stooped until the last released chapter of this book, I think that it's pretty good, although action, friendship and adventure aren't my cup of tea when they are together in a book. There are also some grammatical errors here and there, I also think that the chapters are pretty short. Finally, if these things are corrected, I think that this book will be an awesome one.
its good, i actually loved it, the plot is good and creative......i am enjoying. the story structure is good, and seriously a novel requires a lot of mind and attention but i loved it, the few starting chapters may seem childish as thw writer is writing as the main chracter itself, so it shows that the main character was innocent at the start and dosen't know anything, biut as the story goes, the words get bolder and sadder, it shows that the mc is getting braver and experiencing things
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