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I don't know of the author would read this but... I would like to say that this book is actually interesting. Though the narration is not the best, it has its own charm in it. I like the aura surrounding while reading your book. I feel like this could be a popular novel in the future. Just work on some spaces and capitalizations, you will do good in the future :)
Great work you have done author-san, i can feel how much effort you put into your writing 😸👏 I even think you're a chef with that description on cooking process 👍 The writing style, gramar & vocab to describe something, point of view, battle scenes, daily life style, interaction with other characters, and background. Basically well throughout process and well planned. Suggestions ; make power level more clear or give some explanation and the cultivation level people around mc
This story is so awesome. The way how the characters, particularly the MC, is written is good and the plot progression of the story is up to par with a number of well-known good Chinese novels. Hopefully, this story updates more and is continued. After all, little Yan Xiu is cute and it would be interesting to know his cultivation, farming and cooking adventures.
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This is a farming-cooking-cultivation themed story, which sounds promising, hoho. There's little conflict though and it's a bit light. The pace is soothing though and it may be what you need if you read to relax. The MC doesn't stand out much among cultivation protagonists but it's still early stages in the story. Overall it looks promising. I'll be keeping an eye on it, definitely.
Come on!!! When will you......update...........update...........update...........update...........update...........update...........update...........update...........update...........update...........update...........update...........update...........update.....i want to know...why.....how..... when???