Reviews of Harry Potter y el juego

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Good story, there are several problems, but with an editor and possibly a co-writer to make it longer and slower, and make the story more interesting. Continue to the end and possibly later you can cooperate with someone else to do a rewrite.

yes the development of the story is interesting so far, just don't make Harry a toy creature that is stronger than him. if possible, still make Harry independent from the various factions that exist.