Reviews of Harry Potter The Mutant Obscurus Gamer
Harry Potter The Mutant Obscurus Gamer
GnomeBob
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10/10 great World build , great character build, And great story build up, and all round original in its idea. I love the story and would recommend it to others.
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It's simply fantastic. Everything is fresh and interesting, the gamer style and how it works in the setting are really well done and make sense, the different worlds also blend together naturally and don't feel stitched together like some stories. I'm always keen for the next chapter, and each one leaves me begging for more. When Harry become a bit too OP the nerfing is well done too, it makes sense story wise and doesn't feel like a cop out, just a new training tier with harder difficulty because of the circumstances. Overall 5/5 for everything, truly cream of the cream of the crop of fanfic ( With the crop being typical trash that somehow get 4 star rankings and cream of the crop being actually decent not eye cancer, this is a tier beyond and not only good but continually good)
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Great start with an extensive prologue and good setting, but mediocre continuation at best. I liked how his powers were explained and how the author meshed everything together, but apart from that, I'm a bit disappointed. I wanted to write a longer review, but I accidentaly closed the window and I won't bother rewriting it. Basically, if you are looking for an OP MC, you are not looking for this fanfiction. Fast paced start and quite AU, with HP world mattering little. Neither should you read this if you are looking for a nice gamer fic with level ups and all, since this is not part of this fic. There is plenty that I liked, but even more that I disliked. From characters to the way the author writes to the world s/he wrote. The magic system is pretty neat, though I have no idea whether this is just using the marvel comics system or not. Over-all, the author is articulate and the text is of good quality, but there a plenty of points that go ignored in favour of unnecessary or boring parts. Oh, and this is not a Harry Potter fanfiction. This is a marvel fanfiction with the wizarding world being pretty much unimportant after the stretched prologue.
10/10 Would read again So this fanfic is very good, to be honest was hoping for the HarryxHermione cause they spent a lot of time together in volume 1, but Harry only spent one year, learned everything in hogwarts and didnt come back, and at 11 he wasnβt looking for a girlfriend, so they only keep being friends and talking with mail... He goes to become a sorcerer under the Ancient One, meets The Doctor, Amy and Rory (awesome mini arc) then goes to the Academy of Charles Xavier were obviously meets Jean, and wants to help her to unseal the Phoenix So go and Read it, wont be a waste of time, Literally Watched the whole 41 chapters in 2 days cant wait for more... but Iβm still waiting for Harry to meet Tony Stark (as both are geniuses), gets a sample of Captain America blood,Spiderman spiders, and Oscorp Serum (and thus Connorβs Serum) to recreate the Super Soldier Serum...
over usage of muggle technology, dude's supposed to be a gamer, he should excell in magic first then technology, he read Hogwarts, Black, Potter and Dumbledore's collection of book, which should contain some pretty strong spells but mc dumbly used muggle tech with runes and inscriptions, though they are strong, magical spells and strength is first, then technology, runes and inscriptions, that was the thing that tipped me off
My writing style generally involved me writing myself into a corner and then trying to figure out how I'm going to get out of it. So don't expect to be able to predict what will happen next because before I've written the end, even I have no idea how I'm going to get out of it. I have specific things I want to do with the story and pretty much the whole story is just those scenes and the filler between. You can tell this from the Hogwarts Arc where I skipped most of the boring parts and went straight to the fun parts. Because of this, I'd say the story moves at a good pace.
It is good and i enjoyed reading the story but the harey potter arc ticked me off a but. Donβt get me wrong i lived how inventive he was during the tasks of the goblet of fire. BUT the overusage of muggle tech just left a bad taste in my mouth. Apparently he read the whole hogwarts, potter, black and dumbledores personal library. So he knows some really powerful, obscure and rare magic. So why the **** does he not use any of it ??? Instead he uses some runes to adapt muggle tech like a submarine, some drones and a magical gun. In his big show down with Voldemort he doesnt even use magic, he uses a magical gun and goose eats voldemort. It might as well bit even have been the potterverse. All that seriously powerful magic he knows and he doesnt touch it, going as far as to hide his power even when he is more powerful than 99% of the wizards in britain. Just frustrated me.
Great story, 10/10. Little Harry is a little devil... full of sarcasm and naughtiness. I love how his fathers influence rubbed off of him hahahaha. All in all, great book. I recommend every person who enjoys HP fan fiction to read this. Even though the story rushes through the plot... it is very well written and it just doesnt feel that way. The marvel stuff is a lot wider in scope and it sounds promising from what I've read till now. Good luck author, best wishes. *sips tea*
i dont man, the idea was good, First few chapter were good, the whole harry potter arc was rushed with little development in his relationship with others. second arc was boring, keep hiding powers for three arcs hence I got bored...comedy aspect us good, if you have nothing to read then go ahead but you will probably get frustrated by the third arc and then drop this.
