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So this story till now it’s amazing, i hope that author never drops it, the mc is badass, he has a dark Phoenix as a familiar, there isn’t much i can say about the story without spoilers , so he’s obviously going for a good root, he doesn’t care about canon, and isn’t afraid to change it, Just read it till at least chapter 10 to give your opinion
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This is a decent fanfic; it has an interesting MC and the flow isn't bad. However, I find it a little bit boring, as it is too cliched for my taste. There's Dumbledore and Ron bashing, of course, and the main character is quite predictable. On another note, I feel the story focuses too much in pureblood culture - which can be interesting, but isn't, actually, as every concept presented isn't new at all. Moreover, in my opinion, the story is too slow-paced. But I guess that isn't a bad point per se. Overall, this fanfic is decent, but it isn't too engaging, as it is clear that Dumbledore attempts in manipulating the MC won't be successful.
The story is lacking character depth. There is no emotional context to the dialogue, which is otherwise well written. The MC decides a minimal interference approach so as not to change canon too much, but it doesn't hint at what he plans to use the knowledge for... so we end up reading about unmade decisions and untaken actions rather than actual story content.
hope peter is captured and he pushes for demontors kiss for him. Also he should demand compensation from the previous administration like barty crouch(head of the dmle at that time), bagnold(minister of magic at that time) and dumbledore(chief warlock). he could demand all of their money. Also after that he should befriend harry and train him.
This is a righteously ball-bustingly brilliant take on the Harry Potter verse!! There’s sciences in here that I think every hp fan would have loved to have seen happen and some really clever turns as the story has progressed. The author has wonderfully portrayed the beginnings of an alternate path from canon which has flowed consistently so far. Love this book and want to see it continue!!!
Most certainly quite a interesting and intriguing book that has caught my attention got me hooked on reading it even more especially with the MC being the lost son/their of The House Of Black not to mention all the different changes he has done as well his distrust of Dumbledore and what he done to The Malfoy Family look forward to reading more of this book quite intrigued by what will happen next especially during the trial of Peter Pettigrew not to mention overall this book has been quite interesting and intriguing in every way that I can't wait until ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book