Hitansh_Sonwane
Barely any plot and itβs just wizards and magic lol if it had these in the tags wouldβve been okay but him transferring bloodlines from naruto to people then summoning someone from naruto world it just got too much with nothing really happening in the story itβs just summary after summary of what the mc is doing or wants to do but nothing really is happening at all. Just boring
The story is horrible. The grammar is written in sms format. The backstory is cliche. The MC is a clichee overpowered character but i would use the word character loosely because he has no personality, he is like a doll. Finally, the elements from other stories make no sense and are poorly explained.
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