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Harry Potter and the Serpent Child
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Harry Potter and the Serpent Child

Zigfrid_8040

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What is Harry Potter and the Serpent Child

Harry Potter and the Serpent Child is a popular fanfic written by the author Zigfrid_8040, covering HARRY POTTER, GENIUS, GREY MC, Book&Literature genres. It's viewed by 189.7K readers with an average rating of 3.96/5 and 11 reviews. The novel is being serialized to 15 chapters, new chapters will be published in Webnovel with all rights reserved.

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Look at Gabriel's journey into a magical world of magic that he can hate or love with all his heart.How will he follow his father's path, or will a new Dumbledore appear , or will he choose a third party? I don't own the rights to Potteriana, except for MS

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mluna9116
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-Needs to work on grammer -Needs to add some more detail to the events happening in the novel -other than that this book is great -But please do work on your grammar it gives me a bit of a headache trying to read😎

Qrb
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There is potential, but I honestly can't read with so many grammar errors. Author should find a editor or fix it himself because I really is difficult to comprehend and read the way it is now.

Feebling
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Well what to say about this....Grammar? Ok...there are mistakes ( some small, some so great you can't tell what the "author" even means ) but this is fan-fic so a lot of stories here on webnovel are riddled with mistakes. The thing that pisses me off, like REALLY A LOT are the names. Author can't spell names for sh*t. Sometimes the names are entirely different I mean - Gaunt -> Mrax.....how does that even happen? It is nothing like that....Of course grammar with names is also sometimes ****ed up by not using CAPITALS ( even with the wrongly spelled name I think i read "dombles" somewhere as well) .

Daoist721221
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camaztle
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Great story, I would recommend you decide on a set up for speech, thoughts, action, location and things like that. When reading sometimes you can't tell who is talking and when they are done. Also the grammar is not great but it's mostly the phrasing or organisation of the sentence. Good luck.

Phil_Morris
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Zoruja
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Nice story man doesn't drop it !!!!! the story is going well so far just wish that there was more chapters out 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 mc x hermione please :3

Shadow_Kil
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Juwon_Oh
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The story is great, and creative. The only criticism is that occasionally the grammar is off. The grammar mistakes aren't enough to kill the attraction of the story.

Bu_M_Bu_Um
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The story seems to have potential and honestly interest me but it is in dire need of an editor. It looks like it is copy pasted front Google translate.

himailsatish
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Excellent story is completely a new angle which most 👍👍👍👍👍... expecting more .I hope Author doesn't drop the story.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉.All the best

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