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Harry Potter and the Dual Lord

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RADRIPPER
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Terrible...another ridiculous mc that seems to get dumber as he gets stronger to make the story have *******...authors should stop making grindy stories if the grind does nothing and all u want is close epic battles that make no sense

Loyal_Hunter
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MobinHood
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Until he leaves Hogwarts, the story was fantastic. After that it lost in everything except duckedupedness. There are a few completely unreadable chapters. So much potential wasted for a now, at best, bad story.

ddsurvivor
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Really can't say much. since a novel should be reviewed within 30-50 chapters. Cause by then some characters is developed and the story background is decent enough to not confuse the reader. Grammar is good. Character development of MC is good. So is his teacher Merlin. Mother and Father and random lovable sister check. LOL So Far love the Novel. Keep it up, Please!

Rsroar
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Dator_David
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CONTINUE THE STORY PLEASE.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ˜‚πŸ€£πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ‘‹πŸ‘‹πŸ‘‹πŸ‘‹πŸ‘‹πŸ‘‹πŸ‘‹πŸ‘‹πŸ‘‹πŸ‘‹πŸ‘‹πŸ‘‹πŸ‘‹πŸ‘‹πŸ‘‹πŸ‘‹πŸ‘‹πŸ‘‹πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©

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Aduck
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Pretty much the main character is an emo and edgy Mary Sue. No character development at all and the world seems to bend to his will. So only read this story if you are into cardboard characters. Grammar is most fine just a few small mistakes from not checking.

Lil_Twisted
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So far, it seems to be a good story. Author has added a new world background with possible improvements to be able to build the story with more depth than just J.K. Rowling's stories.

Mohd_Zulhilmi_90
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CZPyrite
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Moises_Martinez_5798
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Esta es una de pocas historias realmente mala que dan ganas de no ver mΓ‘s me da asco sobre todo el Mc solo puedo decir una de las peores novelas que he leΓ­do

Zeroz7
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Mm pues no me gusta por donde va la historia pero en general la historia esta bien, tiene como todo su propio mundo de HP para explorar aunque no se creo que esperaba algo diferente a un MC loco pero bueno xd

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Lethal_Drinker
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plot holes, dumb mc, bullshit logic, and it's just boring πŸ’€πŸ’€πŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ€¦πŸ€¦πŸ€¦πŸ€¦πŸ€¦πŸ¦§πŸ¦§πŸ¦§πŸ¦§πŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ’€πŸ’€

Medalha
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grimmhorizon
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VuckLWolf
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So this is great piece of work until author decided to introduce and change MC 'aura'. Well after that chapter I have decided that I cant read anymore because he simply became arrogant kid with a God complex it was sad thing to see. Before he was cool type and I even admied his character but after change he simply became typical wuxia arrogant young master. While his power is simply above average. Authro made amazing world and game him epic quest it rly intrigued me at the start. Few plot twists and turns were interesting. So overal score is what you see. Quality would have been 5/5 if not MC change tho.

EAA
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Arthur Holly fell asleep and he woke up, Except that he didn't wake up in his own body, but in a three years old one. Arthur transmigrated into what seemed to be the same world he previously lived in, except in the past, before he was even born. But everything changed the day of his 4 birthday. He understand he is at HP universe and he and his famly is wizards. Do not mis understand title no cultivation with womans. He gat Dark and light elemen dual elemantalist!? (: