Reviews of Harry Potter and the Chosen One

I guess if I want to try and get my book out there the godly shameless author review is necessary. This is my first ever book so I expect there to be mistakes but personally I am very proud of the world I created here. The story will obviously revolve around the MC but expect a lot of development for the supporting cast as well. This is an interpretation of the “real potterverse” the oc is the missing link for the story that detoured so much from what it should have been. Expect Completely different character personalitIes Situatuions and memorable moments that are loosely guided by canon events. It is a slow paced story and I hope you all truly enjoy the story. Author-sama out!

I really like the premise of the story, especially since it's one I haven't really seen before (not that I've read a ton, but you can only read so many of op mc who inherits 100 different houses). It's a great start, and I hope that you continue to write more awesome chapters!

As of the moment of reviewing (ch26): I like the pace of the story, the author highlights only the bits of the moment that matter (as of yet no plot hols). The highlights show that the author made a background for ~10/20 people who return in the story, which causes the reader to believe the story. Keep updating the story.

love the story. please don't drop.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

This is definitely up there for the top fics that ive read, getting to know new sides of the characters that ive seen in the movies and getting to see the emotional side if the mc its all great can’t wait for more

Awesome HP Fanfic. Definitely different way to go about it which I love. I hope you go all the way with the story and don't give up. Thank you for the great work and keep it up!

I really like this fanfic so far.👍 So I hope it won't be dropped so early.😇 I really like the MC and wonder who she will be together with☺

First things first, I love this fanfiction and send me energy from one author to another. You are doing great and don't let anyone bring you down. Critique time. The grammar, spelling, and formatting are a bit rough around the edges, but not to the point where you can't understand what is happening with at least an 8th grade reading level and some context clues. Although the technical aspect is a bit lacking, the content, flow, and emotion are off the charts. Such an endearing and emotional coming-of-age story. The MC is very gifted and talented because of her deep seeded fear of rejection. She has a lot of trauma but is actively working towards dealing with it. She is very cute and makes me smile. Best thing so far: Author doesn't follow the canon! I wish you the best and hope you can finish this story and take our lovely sweetheart Arya on more adventures through the multiverse!

Brilliant, absolutely brilliant, just found this fic while browsing and I was not disappointed in the slightest, so far it is taking a different route from canon and with unique OOC personalities that make it all its own and keeps me guessing as to just what is going to happen next, I am really looking forward to reading the next update

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A really really great story.. Love it so muuchhh 😁😁👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 Need to see more chapter.. please update again author 😁😁😁😁😁😁🙏🙏🙏🙏

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