A Superb Work 😊👍✨ The novel has a good plot and is promising. I love the pacing of the novel and the way writer writes the story. The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall nice and will desperately wait for the next chapters to release And hope that the writer will continue this awesome work and will evolve even more with time . Mine best wishes are always with you .
First of all I want to emphasize that this is the first work of the Author. There's a good update stability, even tough it's a new novel. The story progress very well and the start is pretty good. The characters are very well made and you can put yourself in the place of the Main Character, as if living hr story while reading. The story is well written. I haven't noted any notable English errors - I mean notable because I myself an not native speaker, so I may miss some minor erros - and the wording choice is very good and concise. You can really understand what is transmitted. Great work! I recommend. Moreso knowing that this is only the beginning of an Author that has great potential [img=recommend]
Gone through the first two chapters and I can say this story has potential though the synopsis given as well as the MC feel a bit too cliche ,hopefully it doesn't turn out as another generic romance novel anyways writing is good and pacing is nice from what I can tell would love to see how this work goes, keep up the good work author 🤗