Reviews of Halo & RWBY: The Hero Detained for Greatness

So far, despite only 6 chapters, the story is good. It gives 5 stars for encouragement. You're doing a great job and don't let anyone tell you otherwise.

Sorry dude but I gotta say it, the title says detained for greatness which makes it sound like the hero is imprisoned, don't you mean destined for greatness? Sorry it was bothering me and I had to point it out. Still great story, keep up the great work.

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its goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood but only problem is that its been a year or so and no more chapters have been made i like the story but no chapters? kinda sad

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Honestly needs some editing but so far it makes but don't do so much time skipping cuz it takes a lot of important things from the story unless that's what you intending but if you need help let me know

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Its a really good read but I have one question and that is when are you going to post the next chapter because it's been 2 months and I really want to see how the story progresses

Its amazing so far im .sad that nothing new has been posted I really hope this wasnt dropped because I am really enjoying it so far.

It was great.