Reviews of Hajimari: creation story
Hajimari: creation story
Alyssa_potato
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- Writing Quality
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- Character Design
- world background
tracksLv4tracks
I was pretty good so far, could be longer if u talked more about each character. But it is your first story so it's understandable. Just keep trying and do your best!!!
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