MIKK
Not going to lie...I like it..Stupid OP [has potential to be ] and no one knows.. dope....look so far its made out [somewhat] MC's parents are ****..so keep it that way...separate them,,,, no bonds fixed and at worst bash them...people like neglect fanfics but hate it whenever family relationships are magically build back..dont do this...Make MC hate or just ignore his family forever...also bash if you want..just dont make MC save or care for his family...keep him OP but make him smart and use it wisely,,,make him dark or grey.....bash..add some romance and fluff and if harem...keep it small and build it..and pls no wife stealing or any issei type ****....And just no crossovers...but maybe world travel?...Anyway goodluck and goodshow
An interesting take on the “Wrong boy who lived” genre. Writing quality is great as well as the stability of updates. Hardly any repeated content from the original works and brings forth the full magical world by exploring different aspects. A very interesting read. The beginning did confused me though, the MC appeared to have an elevated level of consciousness and thinking from a young age and somehow knew of the dark lord. This implied, to me, that the MC was somehow familiar with the original works before being born. However, that aspect was never fully explained. Aside from the above mentioned point, his development thereforth becomes consistent with him being unfamiliar with the world and just someone who works extremely hard. Hope his increased level of maturity is explored later as to why he developed so quickly as a child and the reason for his “genuis” self. Definitely recommended
Ooh whoa, ooh whoa, ooh whoa You know you love me, I know you care Just shout whenever and I'll be there You are my love, you are my heart And we will never, ever, ever be apart Are we an item? Girl quit playin' We're just friends, what are you sayin' Said there's another, look right in my eyes My first love, broke my heart for the first time And I was like baby, baby, baby oh Like baby, baby, baby no Like baby, baby, baby oh I thought you'd always be mine, mine Baby, baby, baby oh Like baby, baby, baby no Like baby, baby, baby ooh I thought you'd always be mine, mine Oh for you, I would have done whatever And I just can't believe we ain't together And I wanna play it cool But I'm losin' you I'll buy you anything I'll buy you any ring And I'm in pieces, baby fix me And just shake me, 'til you wake me from this bad dream I'm goin' down, down, down, down And I can't just believe my first love won't be around And I'm like baby, baby, baby oh Like baby, baby, baby no Like baby, baby, baby oh I thought you'd always be mine, mine Baby, baby, baby oh Like baby, baby, baby no Like baby, baby, baby ooh I thought you'd always be mine, mine Luda, when I was thirteen, I had my first love There was nobody that compared to my baby And nobody came between us nor could ever come above She had me goin' crazy Oh, I was starstruck She woke me up daily Don't need no Starbucks (woo) She made my heart pound And skip a beat when I see her in the street and At school on the playground But I really wanna see her on the weekend She know she got me dazin' 'Cause she was so amazin' And now my heart is breakin' But I just keep on sayin' Baby, baby, baby oh Like baby, baby, baby no Like baby, baby, baby oh I thought you'd always be mine, mine Baby, baby, baby oh Like baby, baby, baby no Like baby, baby, baby ooh I thought you'd always be mine, mine I'm gone Yeah, yeah, yeah Yeah, yeah, yeah (now I'm all gone) Yeah, yeah, yeah Yeah, yeah, yeah (now I'm all gone) Yeah, yeah, yeah Yeah, yeah, yeah (now I'm all gone) Gone, gone, gone, I'm gone
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It's good but... do you really have to put the relationship in there at the agehe is? Like maybe when he is around 16 or 17 and higher, that would be better bc then we would get to see more of Hadrian grow up and his character. And the heroin can be the childhood best friend and grow to become a lover something like that. *sigh* Oh well 🤷♀️🤷♀️ if the story is set then that that's, but either way it's a pretty good story other than the romance that's going on/starting. Thanks for reading this far!!! ^_^
It’s a exiting fun and unique story. Not only do we have the lovely and expertly crafted groundwork and world created by J.K Rowling but the author has to my delight and surprise expanded berry skillfully on the world of Harry Potter. This in turn making his story feel fresh and new with everything that happens. You get the feeling the author really puts in allot of work and it’s very easy to tell that not only does he or she care about their work but they are also very talented. Naturally the world of fan fictions has both good and bad and some truly abominable but this work is by far one of the best.